Hi Jadaleigh, I love the way you described the spider, it gives me goose bumps. I felt especially scared when you said it started crawling quickly towards you. I once found a white tail spider in my bed and I was scared to get back in it for hours after! I think for next time you should read your story out loud to yourself before you publish it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.
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Hi Jadaleigh, I love the way you described the spider, it gives me goose bumps. I felt especially scared when you said it started crawling quickly towards you. I once found a white tail spider in my bed and I was scared to get back in it for hours after! I think for next time you should read your story out loud to yourself before you publish it. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.
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